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Neon hereeee. HECTIC LIFE. Everything only SEEMS perfect! JEEZ, trust is such a delicate thing, yet it takes forever to fix. Well, I feel just horrendous, I can roll over and die. And I was looking forward to today b/c I had so many events coming up and stuff! GRAAH. Not even my love and help me. Well, the worst part is that I don't even know WHY I HATE THE WORLD NOW!

Besides that crap, I'm making a Sasuke fanfic. It's obviously all about Sasuke, and his many romances. The title of the fanfic is "His Many Romances", and I'm posting up part of the first chapter here. I hope you guys like it. I honestly think that it should use some work.
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He had awoken groggily, as the sunshine poured through the window. He shuffled out of the bed as he wondered when, how, and where he was. He realized that he was in his room and he stared at his clock blankly. "9:16AM," Sasuke read tiredly. As he struggled to get out of bed that Tuesday morning, he had almost awoken someone. To his confusion, he hadn't realized that there was someone else in his bed. Sasuke looked over his shoulder to see his best friend lying in bed. "...Naru...to?" Sasuke whispered to himself. Sasuke looked around anxiously, desperate to have any recollection of last night. He peered at himself: no shirt, just pants. Sasuke couldn't tell what Naruto was wearing, since he was under the blanket. Sasuke closed his eyes, hoping that it would bring any memory back. Sasuke sighed as he dropped his head into his hands, as if he had a hangover or headache. "What happened last night?" Naruto suddenly moved over a bit, still sleeping, facing Sasuke's direction. He lightly snored. Sasuke enjoyed the soothing noises he made, as he found it relaxing. Sasuke sat on the wooden floor, almost falling asleep again. He resisted the urge of sleeping, due to his exhaustion, but he eventually gave his urge of resting. He faintly fell asleep, only visualizing a calm sanctuary. Instead of the peaceful chirps of birds, he imagined the soothing snores of Naruto.
Sasuke awoke with more energy than last time. He let out a mighty yawn, and to his surprise, his bed was empty. Sasuke jumped up, looking around his room like some lunatic searching for a prized possession. "SASUKE!" Naruto, dressed in a T-shirt and shorts, glomped Sasuke from his closet, making Sasuke fall on his bed. "Y-Y... Naru-to! Get off of m-!" Sasuke could not breathe with Naruto squashing him. Naruto quickly jumped off. Naruto chuckled softly. "Sorry, Sasuke." Naruto shrugged innocently. Sasuke glared angrily at Naruto. "Naruto, what are you doing here?" Naruto stared at Sasuke with confusion. "What do you mean?" Naruto scratched his head slightly. "...you don't remember yesterday?" Sasuke shook his head solemnly. "Well, we went out for ramen with Sakura and Kakashi-sensei. And I crashed your place. We, hmm..." Naruto searched for an answer, scratching his chin. "...well, we kinda..." Sasuke stared at Naruto intently. "WE DID THE HARE HARE YUKAI TOGETHER!" Naruto exclaimed. He jumped on Sasuke's bed, wildly humming the Hare Hare Yukai song and doing the dance. Sasuke watched on with shame. "I seriously did that?" Sasuke said, disappointed. "Yeah! It was totally BOMB," Naruto said, jumping on the bed repeatedly. Sasuke sighed.
He got on the bed and gently pushed Naruto off. Naruto stumbled a bit, trying to catch his balance. "Hey, hey, hey! Sasuke, what are you doing?" Naruto said, a tad bit irritated. "I'm going to change. Go away," Sasuke coolly replied. "Eh? And I can't watch!?" Naruto joked. Sasuke gave a heavy sigh and pushed Naruto out the door, and slammed it. Sasuke changed into his collared shirt and his shorts. He put his headband on strategically. When Sasuke was finished, he took a look into his mirror and stared at his artificial self. "I think we did just more than the Hare Hare Yukai," Sasuke said deeply. He closed his eyes for just a moment, then opened them slowly. He saw a different Sasuke in his mirror. He saw a Sasuke was happy. He was smiling. He had delight in his eyes, as it clearly shown. Sasuke turned, his back facing the mirror. He then opened the door. "Naruto?" Sasuke walked down his hallway, towards the living room. "Naruto?" He repeated. Sasuke went on outside, leaving his house.  He acted like he was not concerned of Naruto's whereabouts. As Sasuke reached the city, he had a sick feeling washing over him. However, he did not realize that this feeling was a positive thing. He continued to his aimless walk around the city, but everywhere he went, he had pictured Naruto's face. Sasuke smiled a bit as he passed by the ramen bar. He quickly erased the smile from his face. Soon, Sasuke was in a serene forest and Sasuke climbed a certain tree. "I''m here," said Sasuke, half-yelling. "Good," said a voice. From nowhere, Kakashi showed up. "I had missed you Sasuke," Kakashi deeply said. Kakashi stroked Sasuke's face slowly, his eyes pierced through Sasuke's when they met. Kakashi leaned toward Sasuke sensually, but Sasuke looked away. "Kakashi," Sasuke whispered, with a trace of worry in his voice. Kakashi pulled down his mask slowly as he leaned forward further. He licked Sasuke's cheek slowly, as Sasuke tried to escape his firm grasp. Kakashi finally sensed his worry, and went back. "What is concerning you, Sasuke?" Sasuke's eyes didn't meet Kakashi's, as he said, boldly,  "I came here to talk, not to clown around." "What do you mean?" Kakashi's voice sounded a little irritated, although his face had shown no emotion. "Do you happen to have any recollection of yesterday? I do not remember anything," Sasuke asked, turning to Kakashi with desperate eyes. "Uh, yes I do, in fact," Kakashi solemnly said. "...why must you know?" "I'd like to know why I have developed strange feelings this morning." Sasuke said.
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VampireHazel will make this into a doujin manga if it turns out to be good enough! Yesh.

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